RKnight

I really liked the idea behind this. It's cute, funny and very romantic comedy only problem really is I wish you'd show instead of tell. There's a lot of she ...

It's a great start! I actually like the suspense, though I don't quite understand what's going on but I think I might sorta... It's not poorly written, or anything like ...

Wow, this is really well written. I really like the ending, it makes the entire thing for me. I look forward to reading more, though did you ever consider inverting ...

I'm not sure how i feel about this. I understood the concept, and I see what you were trying to vividly paint in the readers mind. I just wish it'd ...

This wasn't half bad. I was kind of expecting something mushy and just blech, but it was a pleasant surprise. I had a bit of trouble trying to find a ...

I really like this. A lot. How you began it was great, shugah, very great imagery. The emotion of Alice and of Scott is really real (is that redundant?) and ...

I love this idea for a story. It's so original and yet homey (at least for me). though others corrected your work, I think you might want to think of ...

It was good- even great, but you were missing some important stuff. I wasn't sure what was actually going on. Maybe start off with a setting somewhere, and introduce the ...

This is a very interesting piece of work. I hope it does end up in a novel for you because the way you start was just... superb. You introduction grabbed ...