RKORyder

This sounds alot like a prayer I once heard. :) So you just randomly came up with it?

This is amazing. They words have so much meaning. Great job. :)

Wow. Not gonna lie. This really made me want to cry! This is really well written. I really enjoyed this.Good job! Keep up the amazing work!

Wow. This is really well written! I really enjoyed this.Good job! Keep up the amazing work! :)

this is beautiful! Great job! :D

Wow...this is, sad, and touching and, just amazing... Aww. Thank you! :D There was actually alot of cursing in this but I changed the cuss words for if younger people ...

Ugh, I'm sorry, that really sucks. On the bright side you managed to encompass an entire young person's life in one dramatic encounter. I get the feeling that anything else ...