QueenOfWords

Hello, Fiend! :) I like the idea of this poem. And I like this poem. But I think it could be better. Right now it's just, this is how it ...

Hey Iggy, just going to point out a few technical errors for you. In the very beginning, the woman says "How could you", but the man says "How dare I". ...

Okay. I'm going to ignore content and focus on structure for this one. I get the idea of what you're trying to accomplish with this poem, but I think it's ...

Hi there! :) I haven't read the previous chapters of this story, but I'm going to review this piece anyway. Okay, so first of all, I noticed right away that ...

Hi! I'm going to attempt to write a helpful review now. This is a very artistic, intriguing poem. I love the way you used a seesaw to represent the delicate ...

Hi there! I'm gonna review this lovely, wonderful poem for you today, okay? So, first things first, it was awesome. Now, on to business. :) In the second line, you ...

I like the concept of this poem, but it needs a little grammar work. Nothing wrong with that, we all make mistakes. :) Up at the top, that "i'm" should ...