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Sorry I misinterpreted that. Then you could show how you need to count to that number and show the need more than the actual counting.

Oh! That makes sense now that you explained it. I would suggest using a different wording than "ring" and "frequencies" then because that implies a sound of some sort. I ...

I can see them pretty clearly

I don't think you've ever been in love if you don't understand some of my wording. "Taunting" and "drowning" are exactly how someone feels when they have been in love. ...

First of all, your review consisted of you just repeating my poem. Second, I did use stanzas.

Thanks for the really concentrated review! I see what you mean about present and past tense and although sometimes I slip up with that, the line "He has her heart ...

Thanks for the review and the color! Haha! :D Anyway I'm glad you liked it. The thing is I already have a comma in "Now, locked" and it's grammatically incorrect ...

It didn't seem very abrupt to me. The whole thing is a metaphor really, and that line was how I crossed over into something that was never my right to ...

Thanks! And I do use different websites to see my options and I actually was drawn to having plate in there because after this experience the girl became very guarded ...

Thanks for the help! And me and this person were never together and it wasn't love or anything. I just felt like they had a strong impact on me and ...

Thank you so much! That really boosted my confidence (even though I am actually a ma'am) :)

Thank you so much oh my goshhhhh I hate the spacing thing on this site agh! And I wasn't trying to rhyme that much with this really so that doesn't ...

I'm decent, haha. And yes I noticed the meter! It's really a good skill to have.

Thanks!

You didn't make it clear on what was missing but it does relate to the rest of the poem. People can be so simple minded that all they care about ...