Purple

Thank you so much for all your kind suggestions! I completely understand when you said that nothing huge happens, and to me that's actually okay. It seems that you read ...

Thanks for the review! With the word "Eyes' It's purposely repetitive to expand the thought that began from the first stanza.

I can see you have a thing for images lol. That's fine and all just not what this piece was aiming for. And shaping a life with someone like building ...

Thanks so much! It really means a lot :)

I think you should give them a story to develop on. Yes, giving a little scene or character description/preference would be nice. However, the plot and story that wraps around ...

The style of this particular piece was for a symbolic reason and poems I guess don't necessarily need punctuation and capitalization all the time. Like the first reviewer noticed, it's ...

Thank you for the review! I think taking out the "when" in that beginning statement of one of the poems would alter the others and would change the meaning. I ...

Thanks!

I'm glad this appealed to you even though you don't typically like poetry :D *returns mental thumbs up* And stanza is the right word, don't worry.

Thank you, I really appreciate how well you understood everything that I hoped readers would!

I think it's up to the reader to decide what happened to the narrator. Accepting your everflowing thoughts and emotions and problems can mean being at peace or finding an ...

Well if you ever plan on making it longer or publishing another piece like this I'd look forward to reading it! :D

Hi Purple here for review day! Am I allowed to just say...Um..what? I mean I like your humor but still this just sort of might waste someone's time if they ...

Thank you so much! I'm enthralled by the positive feedback I have gotten so far :). I put commas where you suggested haha. I'm always a little concerned about interrupting ...

Thanks for proof reading it :x sometimes I forget to do that. The rhyme scheme was supposed to vary; I usually do that to make it more unique.