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Re: Pretty Little Lucifer
Sierra. This was a strange poem. Selling one's soul to the devil is an old concept, but it can be definitely traced to the legend of Faust. Faust is a ...
May 25, 2011 -
Re: Miserable
Qoh16. "Strife" and "life" are painful rhymes. It seems as if you used the word "strife" only to make it rhyme with "life". If that is the case, why rhyme ...
May 25, 2011 -
Re: I believed in fairies.
wewinwelose. This was a sad poem. It was mainly sad because of the line about love. But do you not realize that when most people grow up, they find love ...
May 25, 2011 -
Re: My Name
Sannah. This was an interesting poem. It was unusual, and it gives a good sense of how you feel about your name. Why do you capitalize every beginning line? Is ...
May 25, 2011 -
Re: I Forget My Age.
KatTrain. This poem is sad. Does the poem imply that when she is seventeen, the narrator will kill herself? But I liked "grotesque waistline of 5." Why is there a ...
May 25, 2011