Pternoha

Ah, adulthood! So intimidating, and so bloody overrated. I remember having been in that same situation. And I still am not quite sure who I am to be honest. The ...

Beautiful piece, there is a certain melody flowing through the whole poem, keeping the interest of the reader. The imagery is well chosen, and very indicative of the powerlessness you ...

I am, as a general rule of thumb, really not a fan of enjambments, or of telegraphic poetry for that matter, especially when the enjambments really do not respect the ...

Well, that is interesting to say the least, though I am not sure I quite understand. But then again, I am not sure I am supposed to, that is part ...

Lovely piece, I particularly like the flow of some parts of the poem. The leitmotiv "The ocean whispers my name" does wonder to set the tone and rythm of the ...

That is actually pretty interesting, I very much like the imagery and aesthetic of the poem, especially the idea of coming down from a heigtened state. I do have to ...