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Re: It's Over, Now.
I love the rhythmic rhyme scheme in this poem and the very vivid description. The possessive tone goes well with this description and the poem slowly develops into a very ...
Feb 4, 2016 -
Re: The story of my life from a comfy chair
First of all I would like to say thank you for your deep and thorough review of my work and that I hope you like my second piece. I would ...
Jan 18, 2016 -
Re: The story of my life from a comfy chair: Case file 2
Thank you for your review it will help me in future to refine my writing. I would just like to address the fact that at the time of writing I ...
Jan 14, 2016 -
Re: The story of my life from a comfy chair: Case file 2
Thanks so much for the review, sorry if I didn't pick up on your advice as well as I could have the main reason for that was I had already ...
Jan 14, 2016 -
Re: The story of my life from a comfy chair
Thanks and I'm glad you liked them
Jan 11, 2016 -
Re: The story of my life from a comfy chair
Thank you for your review, it means a lot being my first and I would to also thank you for giving both the good and the bad. Furthermore, you have ...
Jan 8, 2016 -
Re: Last coin
I think this is very intriguing and would love to keep reading more of it. The tone and style of writing is absolutely fascinating. I'm new to this website and ...
Jan 7, 2016
