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Psychologicaltorment

  • Poetry » Horror, Realistic Re: It's Over, Now.

    I love the rhythmic rhyme scheme in this poem and the very vivid description. The possessive tone goes well with this description and the poem slowly develops into a very ...

    Feb 4, 2016
  • Short Story » General, Narrative Re: The story of my life from a comfy chair

    First of all I would like to say thank you for your deep and thorough review of my work and that I hope you like my second piece. I would ...

    Jan 18, 2016
  • Short Story » Horror, Dramatic Re: The story of my life from a comfy chair: Case file 2

    Thank you for your review it will help me in future to refine my writing. I would just like to address the fact that at the time of writing I ...

    Jan 14, 2016
  • Short Story » Horror, Dramatic Re: The story of my life from a comfy chair: Case file 2

    Thanks so much for the review, sorry if I didn't pick up on your advice as well as I could have the main reason for that was I had already ...

    Jan 14, 2016
  • Short Story » General, Narrative Re: The story of my life from a comfy chair

    Thanks and I'm glad you liked them

    Jan 11, 2016
  • Short Story » General, Narrative Re: The story of my life from a comfy chair

    Thank you for your review, it means a lot being my first and I would to also thank you for giving both the good and the bad. Furthermore, you have ...

    Jan 8, 2016
  • Short Story » Realistic, Narrative Re: Last coin

    I think this is very intriguing and would love to keep reading more of it. The tone and style of writing is absolutely fascinating. I'm new to this website and ...

    Jan 7, 2016


We know what a person thinks not when he tells us what he thinks, but by his actions.
— Isaac Bashevis Singer