PsychicNinja

Okay one post... Well, I'll just post... I just finished reading Young Jedi Knights: Shards of Alderaan by Kevin J. Anderson and Rebecca Moesta. Shards of Alderaan was a good ...

good job, marc. Yeah, i'm finally getting to read some of your stuff. ~Timea

Hi! would be great if i liked romantic stories... I'll just go to the next part! Can't wait! ~Timea :D

Hi! Good new part! Character development is developing! Just one note...Rin is supposedly dead.... When Kakashi said everyone he loved is already dead..i believe he meant Rin as well... but ...

yay! I finally got the chance to read this! I love it! Your description is great! no ice cream..dang.. Well..I really liked your description, and I think this sets up ...

I still like it! The description is fantabulous. :D It has great meaning, and I get a clear idea of what is going on. You should try to avoid semi-colons, ...

Hi Siegfried! Ok! I read it and I really liked it! It caught my attention, and I liked the dramatic moments! I also like how the story goes right into ...

Hello Star Wars buddy! omg! I really liked it! It was very dramatic and brings out Jaina's feeling! It made me cry! Good job! ~PN

I fixed some more stuff! Hope it sounds better now! 8) ~PN

HaHa! Very creative! I like it! ~PN

I fixed some stuff! :D ~PN

Woot! You reposted it! Yeah, the detail is way better now! ~PN

One more thing>>to Jabber's comment. If you haven't read any books, you wouldn't know who Jaina Solo was in the first place. So if you've read them, you can tell ...

Great! I love it! Jaina is my second favorite character, Mara being my first! I love it! May the Force be with you! ~PN and a Star Wars fanatic

Sounds good! Keep it up! Good luck! ~PN