PsyLynx

simply beautiful

I have to confess that when I wrote this, I never thought I'd type it out. The last couple lines, about how awful it was, was just what I really ...

that's pwetty. I love it.

hey, I'm open to some. I worked on a lot of what Xantham said... but some things are permanent. ho hummm.

I've added an extra m to hum, because I don't want it pronounced "hum" when reading this, I want it pronounced, "hummm." I figure if I have three m's, you ...

I like them...it's all style, Xantham. It's not too common in...the poetry that is written by ordinary poets these days, but there have been times when they were pretty common ...

read it now. Hey, I liked it. Continue it, definitely. Love clocks in stories. I used them in one of mine, and now I want to use them in everything. ...

I didn't read it, at least not yet, but I love the title. Period.

wow. so humble. Completely pure images. I love it. Absolutely. Don't change a word.

yeah, it definitely wasn't good enough to merit all of this. Maybe when edited. Not in its "if birds were to shit" state. No. Just...no.

I really didn't edit this that much, because I wasn't sure that there was that much to salvage. Since I feel now like there was...I edited it. Thanks for the ...

Xanthan, thanks. I didn't change the early morning spring to early spring morning, because, frankly, that changes the meaning to make it early in spring, and morning, rather than early ...

I didn't think it was brilliant, but I certainly liked it.

heh. The 'because' is explaining why I'm saying all this. I too was at a school dance that night. Stopped in the middle of it to stare at the disco ...

ever read A Clockwork Orange? No. Bezoomny is a word used in it. It's beautiful, so I used it. The stuff that can be misconstrued as philosophy is basically all ...