PsyLynx

I read the entire thing aloud, and I was completely lost. What did it have to do with homosexuals? Why was that brought up? Why was everything because there have ...

stunning...wise...wonderful. the twist at the end, bringing in those who've died and are in some form of heaven, is unusual, though...somehow making it a slightly bright picture...maybe it's just my ...

I really like it, and can't find anything for you to improve. Good job. But for being triple x rated, there wasn't as much sex and violence and dogs as ...

I really think that you were looking at this wrong. It's an empty stage, that's it, and I was sitting by one and listening to it, and that was all ...

uber uber excellent

I do agree with Liz, loved the poem, can work on cliches. The only other thing was the ending...hmmm...I like what you said, just now how you said it. felt ...

do you think that the ending lays the rhythm on too thick?

however, there is no way that this is five-stars good, no way at all. Someone hurry and give it a shitty review so it's overall more accurate.

it is a monologue. Shakespear had tons of those. Pardon me for not fitting into your narrow definition of poetry. Poetry is anything you want it to be. There is ...

very oriental. The sort of piece that's supposed to tell you, "okay, I've said that. Try to understand it, you probably do understand it, now try to put the peices ...

yeah, I thought it was kind of lame. . .meh. I just don't think that you had anything with it.

obviously the profanity does alienate any audience who is totally against that on purely moral grounds. But I can't show those people poetry anyway. Sigh. The battle over censorship. I ...

*sigh. Well, I liked it, at least.*

hey, me likes, me likes a lot. Can't think of a way to improve it. Love the image of swinging cages...

no, wait, this is definitely better than my stuff. Kudos.