PrymRose

Thank you HarryHardy! This is very useful information! Most of it I didn't even notice but now that you mention it, I can see the things I should go back ...

Thanks for the feedback Axi! This is definitely just a rough copy, so I will be sure to use your ideas, and will try my best to make my words ...

Thank you StarlitMind! I am planning on going back and editing everything soon, and I will be sure to use your suggestions. I'm glad you like the story, and to ...

Thank you HarryHardy! And thanks for reading this chapter! I will be sure to go back and make a few changes, this is only my rough copy! :)

Thank you RadDog for the input! I will be sure to go back and edit my work!

Sounds great!

Thank you Thorn for the ideas, I will be sure to put those into perspective!

Thank you RadDog! This is very helpful! I will be sure to go back and edit to make the image of the orphanage more clear! I will also make sure ...

Got it! Thank you for the tips, I will be sure to add them.

Thank you for the feedback EternalRain! I will definitely put those ideas into perspective!