Prosithion

thanks for the crti. ^_~

that was sort of cruel! :cry: :(

well said, Imp

I don't believe that I've ever heard of him. how is his writing?

oh, LOTR DEfinitely. HP was as lame as they come, but LOTR was Epic.

IT WAS TERRIBLE. There was no real plot, and Vitoria disproved Einstein's Theory with a can of tuna fish. Come on. It was a very lame book.

I do not like CD. I read the first half of A Tale of Two Cities, and had to put it down. It was terrible. I've also read David Copperfield. ...

Yes, it was a very good book. Very Descriptive.

what does that have to do with gambling? Otherwise, very good. Why Paris?

YEA!!!! Some one who rhymes!!!!!!!! That was very well done. Very descriptive, and very neat rythem. Wonderful poem. I want more!

as Sohini said, very thoughtful. I'm not sure what you wre trying to get across. Maybe make it a bit more clear. ^_^

This is an unusually soft peice. It isn't as blatent as some, but it is very good, and was very well written. I want to read more.

This was very well done Jiggity. I have only one complaint. there doesn't seem to be any recognizable rythem. It may just be me, but I think a little fiddling ...

Thanks FS. hope you liked the story

I very much agree with Blue Haze. KEEP writing. You have a lot of talent and potential. I'll ber sure to watch your work closely and crit it, because I ...