Prosithion

OK, this story was so stupid it was funny. I think you could have described the main "characters a bit more, but then, that's just me. I liked it for ...

Sorry about that. When I go to edit it, all of the paragraphs are where they are supposed to be. I have no clue why. :? :? :?

I have to agree with all of the above. I don't particularly like haikus, but that was one of the better ones that I have read. :D

Ok, Reicheiu, I'm sorry. This spat is getting us nowhere, and its bad to have enemies, so lets drop the whole thing.

Ok, Reicheiu, What do you suppose that I meant when I said [quote]In the eyes of the pop culture[quote]. I'm saying that Popular culture makes people think in weird ways. ...

I liked it. You got the scotish accent accross very well. It makes me want to find out what happens. I don't really have anything to critique

I liked it a lot, but i'm not sure you meant what I think you meant. Happy After Easter. :D

I have no idea what you just wrote. It sounded nice, but I didn't understand a word of it. :D

What on Earth are you talking about. I have no idea what I just read. You might want to explain it at the end of the story? Poem? Thing. :?:

It was good, but I think you have to work more on the rhythm and the rhyme scheme. The wording didn't seem to make a lot of sense. That is ...

I thought that that was very good. However, I'd have to agree with everything that McPheever said. Those little details can really change a story. :smt031

Thanks a lot for the imput. I'll look into it and fix up those mistakes you mentioned. :D

I thought that that was a wonderful story. I particularly liked the description which helped me to picture exactly what was going on. Wonderful job. :thumb:

I thought it was good. :D

Thanks for the imput. :D