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When I Should Be Paying Attention
When the teacher is blatheringon and on about somethingof which I don't have the remotest ideaI pick up my pencil and start scribbling.A girl with four eyes here,a bouquet of ...
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Escape (or Wings, which one do you think is better?)
I know the last two stanzas seem as if they don't belong. I'd love suggestions about how to change that.Sometimes while sitting idleWhen there's nothing much to be doneI wish ...
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The Deranged Bibliophile
Spoiler! : The first stanza's about harry potter, second one is about the chronicles of narnia, third stanza's about percy jackson and the fourth one is about twilight. The book ...
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Music and Lyrics
Riya sat on a rock about ten feet away from the sea. She tried to push back tears as she looked at the waves, the moonlight playing on them and ...
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Please People Stop Fighting
This poem is very close to my heart, maybe because it's about something I feel very strongly about. The country I'm referring to is India, my home. Due to it's ...
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Save Her
This poem is also something I feel strongly about. I would like some comments on my punctuation. I'm really bad at it and I've tried to do better in this ...
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The frog, the dog and the prince
These three mini-chapters are how I intend to start a novel I've been planning to write. I want to get off to a good start so I would love suggestions ...
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Never Before YWS
There I was switching on my computer one day, eager to visit YWS, when I realized to my horror that the internet connection was not working. It took a few ...