Priceless

Hello there! This was very beautifully done. I found it so eloquent, lovely language and the sentences flowed so well. Awesome job, really! Give yourself a pat on the back. ...

Hey there!! This was really short and sweet, and yes, a bit confusing. You're good at description, but you need to make it a bit clearer what's going on.

Hi there! Useless praise alert. I loved this!! I just loved it!! The chorus was amazing! This would make a really good song. You portrayed how you felt about the ...

Beautiful. Simply beautiful :)

Aw, loved this! It was so funny. Seemed pretty perfect to me :)

Hi! You is a really good writer. :) I loved this. It was so beautiful, I love your description. I noticed nothing wrong with it at all. Keep writing!!

Hey there! Overall, I really liked this. The whole dream/brain thing was very unique. Creative! Keep writing, this was really good :)

Hey there, I really really liked this!! It was very interesting. Very well-written, I love your style. Keep it up! :)

Hey, I LOVED this!! It was creepy, gave me the chills, but very well written. I didn't see anything wrong with it at all. You have great talent!! Keep it ...

Hi there, I liked this. 'Twas very well written, very nice. Any nitpicks have already been pointed out ^^. Keep writing :)

Hey, This was so sweet!!! I loved it!! It was so adorable! I have nothing to critique at all, it was just too cute.

Hii, Again, the tense thing. It keeps jumping from past tense to present tense. Also, her getting into the limo with a stranger and stuff is totally unrealistic. To me, ...

Wow. That was amazing, truly amazing. You just got everything right!! To me, at least. I loved this, it was really good.