Priceless

Hola! ^.^ This was beautiful. I'm sorry, I saw nothing wrong with it at all. It was so unique, I've never read something about a chess set before. Your writing ...

Hi there! :) This seems like a pretty nice story. I liked the idea, and your main character was adorable, his faith in God and everything. But here, you were ...

Hey there, This was beautiful. This was really, really beautiful. I loved everything about it. Your writing was amazing, really. It was dark and beautiful. I could picture everything clearly ...

Hi there! This was really sweet. I really like the idea of letting go of the balloon, it was perfect to demonstrate letting go of a human being. Your writing ...

Hi there!! This was really nice. Um..I'm not exactly sure how to explain why, but it was. xD Her mother, scorned by a car crash, has left me here to ...

Hi there! Sometimes you don’t realise the lie you made until you see the truth. That doesn't sound right. How did full weeks pass? I agree with Noelle, this doesn't ...

Hey there, This was really sweet. It sounded like it was written from the heart. A year since I left you... Ellipses suck. Avoid them as much as possible in ...

Hi there! This was quite cute. ^.^ But I was a weeee disappointed cause' of the title. I think you should describe the 'playground love' more. How they used to ...

Hey there, Sorry to be harsh, but I do agree with the other guys. This story was kind of bland, it's like..what happened? You should add something unusual, or some ...

Hi, I loved this. It was so beautifully written. I'll just second what Dudette said. :) Only thing I had an issue with were the ellipses. It's been drilled into ...

Heya Suddenly, she ran towards the frightening waves and was engulfed by the salted salty water. Eh, already been pointed out, but the formatting is off. The dialogue shouldn't be ...

Hi there, The memory of my parents’ death still haunted my memories. I was so shocked. My parents were good people, and they never tried to hurt anyone. My parents ...

Hiya! Okay, this might sound a little harsh, I'm sorry. :( I'm just tryna help! ^.^ It was the summer day everyone loved, the warm sun beating on your face, ...

Hey there. Priceless here for your review. :) I've been awake for a month now and already I see the changes in mum ; she hums. Awake for a month? ...

Hey there! Me again. :D I liked this chapter too, it was great. I just have a few corrections that I think would make it sound even better: Jacksin had ...