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  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, General Re: The Perfect Lady Chapter 3

    Heya pretzelsing here for a review, I have been following your novel and I was ssssso excited when it first came out. Just one little request, for next time, could ...

    Feb 21, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Realistic, Romantic Re: The Story of Us Chapter Two: Andy

    Heya pretzelsing here for a review, I read your previous chapter and I have to say that you have worked stubbornness into both characters very skillfully through their actions.Just as ...

    Feb 21, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Adonia, Beloved / Chapter 2

    Heya pretzelsing here for a review, I have to say that you changed some things in this chapters and it was interesting.I was intrigued by Adonia's character, why did she ...

    Feb 21, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, Fantasy Re: Tainted Skies 2.3

    Heya pretzelsing is here for a review, So to say I really like this chapter-even if it was written in a rush, as I can sense that it was. Maybe ...

    Feb 21, 2015
  • Short Story » Realistic, General Re: .

    Heya pretzelsing is back here for the review, I read your work and I will really try ;) not to repeat what others had said. I usually skip intros and ...

    Feb 20, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Supernatural Re: Blurb

    Heya pretzelsing here for a review, I have to say that this was mysterious and I liked it because it drew me right in.With that being said, this piece was ...

    Feb 20, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Science Fiction Re: Forchen Island Chapter 1

    Heya pretzelsing here for a review, I usually skip introductions and get right into the meat of my review :p In this quote is very cliche: . He needed something ...

    Feb 19, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Deception's Blade - Chapter Seven

    Heya pretzelsing here for a review, I was waiting for this installment to come out! I had to say that you did a great job of freezing the moment by ...

    Feb 19, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Camera Obscura - 1

    Heya pretzelsing here for a review(and I am feeling like I am typing quicker than thinking :D ) Okay so I usually skip intros but I have trained myself to ...

    Feb 19, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Adonia, Beloved / Chapter 1

    Heya pretzelsing here for a review again, You wanted me to review this story so here I am. In this quote: The small blade fell from Rahim's hand with a ...

    Feb 18, 2015
  • Short Story » Fanfiction, Dramatic Re: The King

    Heya this is pretzelsing here for a review, I will detail my review and go into nitpicks and general.Okay so to start I have to compliment and tell you that ...

    Feb 18, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, General Re: The Perfect Lady- Chapter 1

    Heya pretzelsing here for a review, So today is my catch up day on my novels that I am following and I noticed that I reviewed your Chapter 2 but ...

    Feb 16, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Other Re: Tainted Skies 2.1

    Heya Deanie pretzelsing here for a review again, This is the last installment that I haven't reviewed so I will try my best to catch up right I never really ...

    Feb 16, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Teen Fiction Re: Tainted Skies 2.2

    Heya Deanie, this is pretzelsing here for a review: I have to say that I felt like this chapter was a filler just like Flite said, it doesn't really contribute ...

    Feb 16, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fanfiction, Mystery / Suspense Re: Plead Insanity Chapter 1

    Heya pretzelsing here for a review, I have to say that one of the things that I really truly liked in this work was that you kept on repeating(three times) ...

    Feb 14, 2015


I wondered why we put villains in our stories when we have plenty of them in real life; then I realized that maybe we wanted stories where the good guy wins.
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