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  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Teen Fiction Re: Sane (The Old Version)

    Heya Willa, Pretzelsing here for a review of these chapters of your novel. I would just like to say that this was quite a read, so I will break it ...

    May 14, 2015
  • Short Story » Fanfiction, Narrative Re: The Forgotten Sorceress

    Heya Despondence, Pretzelsing here for a review. I have to say something, that I love love love your writing style. I am surprised that more people didn't review or read ...

    May 14, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Horror, Mystery / Suspense Re: Think Ch. 1

    Heya Hunter, Pretzelsing here for a review of this first chapter of you novel. I gotta say that I had to force myself to finish this chapter, because at some ...

    May 14, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: The Veil - Chapter 13

    Howdy! Pretzelsing here for a review Woah,the cover is finally blown and Lekan knows all of Qui's plans for why she is meeting with him. That was pretty unexpected in ...

    May 13, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Narrative Re: Walking Survival - Prologue

    Heya Kanome,Pretzelsing here for a review,as was promised on your wall some time ago.Sorry that I haven't gotten to it before now. Anyways,let's begin,shall we? I don't really read a ...

    May 13, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, General Re: Burned 1.3

    Heya Noelle, pretzelsing here on a review roll and I wanted to review this chapter before it got out of the green room. I am still working on the KotGR ...

    May 9, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Supernatural, General Re: Silence is Silver, Ch. 1

    Heya Adrian, I was actually planning to read your novel, because it was spoken so famously about,but you were at about Chapter 50 and so I decided to wait until ...

    May 9, 2015
  • Other » Realistic, Teen Fiction Re: For My Family I Would Be -edited

    Heya Perks, pretzelsing here for a review of this poem of yours. Just like the others said, I also encourage you to never write the author note that you did. ...

    May 7, 2015
  • Poetry » General, General Re: The Earth Is Yours

    Heya Noelle, pretzelsing here to review your poem.

    May 7, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: The Book Man, Chapter 1 (Revised)

    Heya BlueAfrica, I admire you for being so dedicated for this novel. I believe that you are revising it for the third time, correct? The locals called it the Book ...

    May 6, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Typo Alley~G Part One

    Heya r4, pretzelsing here for a review of this next chapter of your novel. I will try to comment on things that other below haven't said. This is my 200th ...

    May 4, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Syrin: Essential Fire - Chapter 2.2

    Heya Wolfare, pretzelsing here for a review.It's quite nice seeing you name in green at the top of the page ^_^. It makes you look more "professional" ;) Anyways,let's begin,shall ...

    May 3, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, General Re: Burned 1.2

    Heya Noelle, pretzelsing here for a review of this continuous chapter of you novel.I want to earn up another badge for the KotGR so I want to be pretty prompt.I ...

    May 3, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Stoneslide - Prologue Part 2

    Heya MaddieMouse, pretzelsing here for a review of this next part of your prologue. There is just so much action here and some things that were unclear to me. Anyways,let's ...

    May 1, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Deception's Blade - Chapter Nine

    Heya firefly,pretzelsing here for a review of this next chapter of your novel. I like it that you posted two at a time because I was dying of suspense during ...

    Apr 30, 2015


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