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  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Teen Fiction Re: Sane (The Old Version)

    Heya Willa, Pretzelsing here for a review of these chapters of your novel. I would just like to say that this was quite a read, so I will break it ...

    May 14, 2015
  • Short Story » Fanfiction, Narrative Re: The Forgotten Sorceress

    Heya Despondence, Pretzelsing here for a review. I have to say something, that I love love love your writing style. I am surprised that more people didn't review or read ...

    May 14, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Horror, Mystery / Suspense Re: Think Ch. 1

    Heya Hunter, Pretzelsing here for a review of this first chapter of you novel. I gotta say that I had to force myself to finish this chapter, because at some ...

    May 14, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: The Veil - Chapter 13

    Howdy! Pretzelsing here for a review Woah,the cover is finally blown and Lekan knows all of Qui's plans for why she is meeting with him. That was pretty unexpected in ...

    May 13, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Narrative Re: Walking Survival - Prologue

    Heya Kanome,Pretzelsing here for a review,as was promised on your wall some time ago.Sorry that I haven't gotten to it before now. Anyways,let's begin,shall we? I don't really read a ...

    May 13, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, General Re: Burned 1.3

    Heya Noelle, pretzelsing here on a review roll and I wanted to review this chapter before it got out of the green room. I am still working on the KotGR ...

    May 9, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Supernatural, General Re: Silence is Silver, Ch. 1

    Heya Adrian, I was actually planning to read your novel, because it was spoken so famously about,but you were at about Chapter 50 and so I decided to wait until ...

    May 9, 2015
  • Other » Realistic, Teen Fiction Re: For My Family I Would Be -edited

    Heya Perks, pretzelsing here for a review of this poem of yours. Just like the others said, I also encourage you to never write the author note that you did. ...

    May 7, 2015
  • Poetry » General, General Re: The Earth Is Yours

    Heya Noelle, pretzelsing here to review your poem.

    May 7, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: The Book Man, Chapter 1 (Revised)

    Heya BlueAfrica, I admire you for being so dedicated for this novel. I believe that you are revising it for the third time, correct? The locals called it the Book ...

    May 6, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Typo Alley~G Part One

    Heya r4, pretzelsing here for a review of this next chapter of your novel. I will try to comment on things that other below haven't said. This is my 200th ...

    May 4, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Syrin: Essential Fire - Chapter 2.2

    Heya Wolfare, pretzelsing here for a review.It's quite nice seeing you name in green at the top of the page ^_^. It makes you look more "professional" ;) Anyways,let's begin,shall ...

    May 3, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, General Re: Burned 1.2

    Heya Noelle, pretzelsing here for a review of this continuous chapter of you novel.I want to earn up another badge for the KotGR so I want to be pretty prompt.I ...

    May 2, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Stoneslide - Prologue Part 2

    Heya MaddieMouse, pretzelsing here for a review of this next part of your prologue. There is just so much action here and some things that were unclear to me. Anyways,let's ...

    May 1, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Deception's Blade - Chapter Nine

    Heya firefly,pretzelsing here for a review of this next chapter of your novel. I like it that you posted two at a time because I was dying of suspense during ...

    Apr 30, 2015


The simple truth is that authors like making people squirm. If this weren't the case, all novels would be filled completely with cute bunnies having birthday parties.
— Brandon Sanderson, Alcatraz Versus the Evil Librarians