Prakash

As your title says, believe that dreams never die. Keep on writing. You would be tuned up fine. But for now, your writing needs more improvement. On reading it, one ...

I too love this serial and enjoyed watching on my leisure time. Your intro part was brief and good. By constructing short sentences, you could avoid errors. But, too many ...

Great work! Your narration was brilliant and spellbinding. The descriptions of the environment was moving at its own pace. I could experience the feel of the wind and the warmth ...