Pozoe12

I was lost in a world that didn't except a girl like me. Except should be "accept". ...and held me up from falling. I find this to be a little ...

All in time This is pretty small, but I was under the impression that the saying was "All in good time"? Not sure, just something to look at, I guess. ...

I'm sorry I don't have time for a real review, but I just wanted to say two things. One, this was great. I absolutely loved it :) Two, why is ...

I'd just like to say that, with all due respect, shubhiloves2write doesn't seem to have a CLUE what she's talking about. Sorry. It's just, you're taking the author's perfectly good ...

Okay, in all honestly, I didn't like the beginning. At all. Filling us in in that informative way with a few paragraphs is NOT the way to go. It kind ...

Okay, I haven't read it all yet-it's long, which is definitely good-but I just had to say that it's good. Definite improvement from before. However, I do have one request. ...

Okay, I haven't read through all of it yet, and I promise I will just as soon as I can. So, I could be completely wrong about this. Or maybe ...

So, here's the thing. It was good. Intriguing and whatnot. BUT I did think it should have been a little longer, a little more drawn out so we could get ...

I like this. :) I really only found little things, and only a couple of them. Nitpicks of mine, I guess. So! In So what if he had a potbelly? ...

Sorry I don't have time for a longer response but I thought the story was great overall! There's one big thing about it though...the title. That's where your spelling and ...

pretty sweet! i'm not much of a poem person, and i've been extremely busy with school and sports so i'm really really sorry this took so long! but yeah, if ...

great job! i thought this was a pretty good short story and it would be awesome if you kept writing! i could kind of sort of see that it was ...

i thought it was pretty good! it was interesting and you did a good job showing Ally's transition from her sister's best friend to worst enemy. however, in the beginning, ...

okay, i hope im not repeating anything that other people said. i probably will though, so sorry in advance. :smt001 okay i only really saw one typo there, and that ...

i've been reading these stories, and i think they're great! but, i have to say i think this one went a little too fast. it was a little rushed. you ...