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Re: Are You Listening?
I absolutely loved the first two paragraphs, the contrast and the contradiction. It captured my attention almost immediately and left me wanting more... That being said, I'd have love the ...
Aug 25, 2011 -
Re: Some of The World's Immortal People Are Alive, Some Are Dead
I like this, not any errors that i picked up. Reminds me of a book i read, "speeches that changed the world" Only yours is more like "people that changed ...
Jul 5, 2011 -
Re: The Man Without a Face (A Countdown of Hours)
Wizadry is just right, perfect way to describe your magic usage of words. The whole coundown of hours thing gave it a nice, dramatic effect. I read this to my ...
Jul 5, 2011 -
Re: One.
"As your arms pulled me in, your hear swallowed me whole" this is one of my favorite lines from this piece of work!! Clever word-play!! I like the general idea ...
Jul 5, 2011 -
Re: count on me
Wow!! How sweet, i really enjoyed reading this. Its got a really lovely ring to it and the words just seem to roll right off my tongue. Smooth word-play friend, ...
Jul 5, 2011 -
Re: The Whispering of Seeds
My favorite line was the part of the story where you used the balloons as a metaphor.... "i want to hold onto them and go where ever they go" it ...
Jul 4, 2011