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Re: The Quest for Fire - Into the Mists - Chapter Twelve
Hello, I am here yet again to do another review that i hope is going to help you. So I must say your description is really good, witch in every ...
Jun 23, 2019 -
Re: The Quest for Fire - Into the Mists - Chapter Eleven
I really liked this chapter, all though it was also really scary to read. I was shiffering when I read, just thinking of what mite happen to Zoltar next. What ...
Jun 20, 2019 -
Re: The Quest for Fire - Into the Mists - Chapter Three
This one was breath taking, I have just got one thing to ask though Zoltar’s heart thundered as he streaked across a barren landscape. Clouds of ash billowed from the ...
Jun 20, 2019 -
Re: The Quest for Fire - Into the Mists - Chapter Two
Again this was great so many lines were just eye caching and strong. He gently placed the bright green melon beside the egg. There was no need to wake the ...
Jun 20, 2019 -
Re: The Quest for Fire - Into the Mists - Chapter One
This was really good. I loved reading it, I hope to read more of your work, also I am just going to go read all the other chapters to stay ...
Jun 20, 2019 -
Re: The Hero's Brother (23.1)
Hello mellifera, Poetry here with just some things I would like to say about this. Also I have not read any of the other chapters so I am just going ...
Jun 20, 2019
