Poetriez

sadly repeating sells :(

1337 \/\/r1771/\/ has no place in writting ahah but its good for 1337 i guess

I hope Some day you will know how it feels to be a shell

I'm curious how You came up with the name and decided to write it that way

Thank You I will have an updated version opf the prologue and thow the fvery short chapter one with it.

OK i like the future thought but can't you make it a bit more apocalyptic or something? make it based after a war or something have some sorta conflict or ...

Thanks For orginality ive noiticed its been mentioned before I have started an oringinal story or i belive to be orriginal but i didnt know what to put it under ...

odd spell check should of picted that up and farsle is fake, not real etc.

I know its hard TO find other words that Ryhm with me. But If you want you can always use slant ryhm. Besides the critisim id also like to say ...