PlasticStarlight

HI! I hope this doesn't sounds flippant or anything but, I really like this and I entirely know why. It's so simple, it comes across almost as a journal entry ...

HI! Well, I’m excited that this is about werewolfes. I can’t get enough of their folklore. I’m intrigued by the idea of taking red riding hood and doing it from ...

This poem seems to be fitting for this week, I think. With all that's happening in the news and seeing just what's been going on in our world. ( Seriously, ...

First off I agree with RoarShark. There doesn’t so much have to be an antagonist to a story so much as a conflict, which you have. This story does seem ...

Hey Stori! I'm a big fan of Anthropomorphic fiction, so I'm excited to see where this goes. If this is chapter one Then you're off to a good start, getting ...

I love that is it diffucult for all of us to limit the choice to just one or two. I'm going to have to go through these replies with a ...

I realize this is almost a year old, but oh well. If you liked the Crank series, have you read " Go Ask Alice"? It's along the same lines. Many ...

Though "The Monstrumnologist" would be my first recommendation as well, another one you could look into is "The Walking Dead." Now I don't know how you feel about graphic novels ...

I have to agree here. The Book Thief is one of those truely beautiful books. The formatting is unique, it threw me off at first but I pushed through it ...

Donnie Darko is a pretty stellar movie, I'd say. I love the points it explores about destiny and fate. Also the bits and piece about time travel ( if you ...

HI! I haven't read the other parts yet, but you've got me hooked. I want to know whats happening to Sam. There's a good amount of exposition. The section isn't ...

Hi there! This sounds like the start of a really interesting premise. There is a lot of exposition going on there, I think it would be more effective if you ...

Hi! interesting format.The first line is a really effective way to show the passage of time " leaves are falling down in my world fade in fade out", at least ...

Just coming in on chapter 9, I'm definatly going ot have to go back and read what's happened before. I like that it is written in first person and that ...