PixieStix

great use of words,and I loved it. The part of when the guy was talking about the "drip,drip,drip" like the main title. I understand why you would write this poem ...

Well, over all it was interesting. I loved it. Well, It was creepy and I understand the consept of this poem and I think that you did it right. Many ...

I love it no matter what because you did great explaining it. like when you added the warewolf! Luv it!!Anyway, you are a great author. ~Pixie~ liv,laugh,glow :D

Hi, This is a tip thing. I think that you could have used more discription, like sometimes in the beginning you were great!! But overall it was one of the ...

First of all, I agree with the last reply. The Big Mac did quite shock me, 2nd of all at the ending of the story you finished it quickly. You ...

I loved It!!!! You had such discription. From just reading the title I knew that it would count as a easy target to read. 1.You need to work on language. ...

This short story reminds me of true love. The emotion you use is divine. I don't know how you can imagine this fantasy in your mind.but everything in the beginning ...

I love it!!! Made me shivver. I love that poem so much. It tells me a story,a nd tells me the girl is starstruck from this boy, and tells me ...

Hi this is Pixie2. I think you had a pretty good start but, Smetimes I did not know who was speaking. Next time mabey you have to write the name ...

This gave me an idea of whats going on. I love how you felt you wanted to write it and you did. A true writer does not just write somthing ...

I love the way you start the story, Gives me an idea of whats going on and I love to see that in writting.Also what I liked is you are ...

I like the topic, And I know what you are trying to say but, You need more detail and feedback of what is going on. The perspective of the poem ...

I love the plot of the story and It gives me the shocks. But at the end of the first paragraph It said, Of a small animal. What is the ...