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Re: ...breaking down
This is really cool...I especially liked the line 'quitting is tempting'. And also the ones at the end 'Is it me shaking?/Or is the whole world?' Very nice.
Apr 25, 2013 -
Re: Unknown titles
This is really interesting. First of all, in the first paragraph, I like your comparison to vultures. It's very relatable. I also like the way that you began every new ...
Apr 16, 2013 -
Re: As I sit under the moonlight
This is beautiful.
Apr 16, 2013