Pivot_Master

Kk thanks for the help one thing i can say is the chapter isnt finished yet :lol:

thanks for the critique as this is only the first chapter there is an explanation for the age which ive had planned since the first idea so never fear . ...

hehe worse than i thought *slaps head* Ill revise it and have a new version up in a few days thanks for the help :D :)

The minutes go My capital babys stay *hiss* Lol thanks for the help Im the worst person youll ever meet for grammer

Isnt that wird against the rules *shields eyes*

Fixed it up quite alot thanks for helping with the spellings *Hits head* Silly boy!

Ah thanks for the help Fixed in the best ways possible :D