Pippiedooda

Hello! :) Thanks for posting in my WRFF thread, I always love to read your work! :D I agree with the comments before me but here are some more nitpicks ...

Hi! :) Another good part :P I think this was a great twist! "Wait a minute, are you like. . . friends with her? I mean don't get me wrong ...

Hey! :D Thanks for the PM, I love this story! As soon as I was inside, I could hear sobbing coming from one of the cubicles. Deciding on the one ...

Hi! :D Sorry it took me so long to get to this part! Could you PM me with each new chapter? I really enjoy your story but I am awful ...

Sorry I only just saw this posted! I like this part, it's getting even more exciting :P I'm so glad you have posted the next chapter :) He had fun ...

Hi sorry it has taken me so long! If I leave it a while in between reviews don't worry about PMing me to nudge me into writing the next one, ...

Hi! :D I don't usually review like this but as the story is quite long I thought it might save time :) My comments are written in bold and the ...

Hi! :D I think this is a very interesting beginning, I loved how you jumped straight in! I agree with the comments made before me but have a few of ...

Hello again! :D I think this is much better, I really loved the improvements. There were a few little things that I’ll point out but you don’t really have to ...

Hello again :D wow! I was not expecting that! I thought this was a really good part, it could do with going over a little bit in the details, but ...

Hi! :D I'm really glad you posted the next part! “Kali, come back,” I yelled, chasing after her. As he is yelling this, maybe an exclamation mark after ‘back’ might ...

Hi forever! :D Thanks for posting in my will review thread! It got buried a while ago :shock: Anyway as it said on my thread, I am not that good ...

Hi! :D I read through your first chapter and prologue and I think you have a really good storyline here- I haven't heard a plot like it and it sounds ...

Hi dudette! Thanks for the PM, I still love this story! :D As always I have to be super picky in my ninja style reviews when going through your work ...

Hi again! I'm glad the next part is posted, its a really sweet story :) All he had to do was ask her about her life back in Assyriac and ...