Pippiedooda

Hi! Sorry this has taken me so long, been a bit busy :) I thought this part was really well written though! Oriel stood by the open door. “We leave ...

Hey! :D Sorry it took me a bit, thanks once again for the request! You are my top customer ;) ooh I'm liking what you are revealing in this part ...

Hi! :D Thank you for posting on my WRFF, I'm sorry to tell you though that I can see very very little that could be improved on this piece, I ...

Hi! :D Sorry it took me a while to get to this review, I read the prologue as well and thought it was a really great way of beginning a ...

Hello again! :D Sorry it took me a while to get to this latest piece, it's really great though! Shadows danced playfully up the walls I think your description of ...

Hey :D Arghhh I hate writers block! Poor you :( This part is still well written though so well done for fighting it :) You should have known better, have ...

Hello! :) sorry this review is so delayed!! I'm still enjoying your story, you have managed to maintain the stories interest for quite a while now and I know it's ...

Hi! :D Sorry I took so long to get to this! I've been kind of busy and now I'm going on holiday so I don't know how long it will ...

Hello again! :D Like with the previous piece, I'm sorry it took me so long to get to this! This really is very well written and I thought you got ...

Hello! :D I'm sorry it took me so long to get to this! I can barely see anything so I'm going to have to be kind of picky :P I ...

Hello again! :D I'm not disappointed at all! I like how you have shown more to do with her friends and Max and also the worry surrounding her cousin- I'm ...

Hello! :D I like how you have introduced the new characters and look forward to seeing how they tie in with those already introduced- Crueton was really funny! :P Crueton ...

Hey Phantom! :D I can't really see many things that could be improved, I think the previous reviews pointed out the important ones but I'll see if I can spot ...

Hi! :D I'm going to have to be kind of picky here as from reading through I can't see anything that jumps to mind, this is very well written and ...

Hi! :D I'm looking forward to how you carry on with this, I like how you have introduced the main characters so far :) I noticed some little mistakes that ...