PinkViper

Hello! I'm Bella, and I shall review your story for you. Let me start by saying that this was just beautiful. I love how you chose the title, for one ...

Hello, welcome to YWS! I'm Bella and I will do my best to review your piece. I'm fairly new at this, so bear with me. Corrections are written in red ...

Hi, I'm Bella, and I shall be (more or less) reviewing your short story ;) So I honestly have nothing bad to say. Grammar was good, punctuation and spelling were ...

Hi, Viper here! This was very refreshing to read, and I have absolutely nothing evil to say about it. Grammar was great, and so was spelling. I loved how much ...

Since you need help in splitting this up a bit, do not fear! I guess this won't really be a review, but here we go. I would say to definitely ...

Man, I wish I had a dog! I really have nothing to say about this, other than it's beautiful! I really got the connection between you and your dog just ...

Hello! I will review to the best of my ability for you. Corrections are in red . This is something I've had in mind for awhile, but I haven't got ...

I love this poem! The end was totally unexpected, yet cute! I really like how you got into the mind of the animal. I believe you used the senses very ...

Wow, this was very exciting! I love how you kept it interesting, but the tone was soft at the same time. You gave us a backstory, which was great. I ...