PinkJupiter

Some things are going to affect them. I'm not sure yet.

I really like what you are doing with this story, although there are always places for improvement. For instance, you could have some more places where you show what is ...

I really like this poem. It's definitely better than something I could come up with. Keep up the good work!

I didn't give much information cause I want the Jedi council to find out her back-story- along with anyone who reads it. That chapter will probably be the next one. ...