Pingu

Maybe I should have posted up the Character summaries first. As for the questions relating to Tatsu. He was fighting at their age, his personality contrasts with his appearance and ...

Thank you for your feedback. Thank you Tatra for those corrections! I'll be sure to work on that! As for some of Midnightgladius' comments. I'll try and clear this up. ...

Curses. I need to download a PDF converter. Though I will most definitely read it once I've gotten that done!

Okay! No problem! I'll be sure to review more! I had been reading a few in the sci-fi section and had given a small review, but I'll make sure to ...

I think this is great! I too would read on. I like your description, very lucid. This is the kind of story I would usually look for on various short ...

Also, I posted this back in the Fantasy section. Due to it being a completely fictional world and set in the present of that world.

Oh damn. Apologies guys.