PiesAreSquared

Thanks. I am still working on my repetition. The "they might I away" is a classic autocorrect! Thanks again!

Anything I wish to say about this piece has already been covered by other reviewers. I don't like repeating advice as I feel that is counterproductive in most cases, so ...

Thoroughly reviewed, this piece has been. No more to add here, I do.

I might review those too. :D

Weird. My draft review has many of your questions...but I'm not done with my review yet. I will edit it to take out repeat questions so we don't ask the ...

Oh it's not confusing for the most part. You could always drop me a note in my review for food tread if ou need reviews on any other pieces

Ok I'm booking this for start my week. I will post my review in another comment. Should you want another review feel f

I still think this is the best I've seen. Any new additions coming out soon?

LOL, thanks for this review! I will certainly try to edit them into the story!

Interesting story, but most of what can be said are already mentioned. However, the style in which it is written discourages readers who are not exactly fluent in English. The ...

Ok, just a note to all reviewers, this is a piece of fiction, and is not meant to be science! Thanks anyway for the reviews :D and this piece is ...

You should not put your poems in "spoilers", they really do spoil the poem

Hey, you double posted this, and you’re underage! :D

hey josh, when i wrote josh it was a typo, the MC was actually not covered in any blood at all

Hey Josh, Thanks for the review. Just to tell someone, my chapters are too short, and although i have already posted my next chapter, i would try to combine the ...