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Re: they sang me to sleep
Hey there.I thought this was really sweet in a sad and slightly depressing kind of way. I just noticed a couple things I dreamt of them again last night. They ...
Nov 5, 2011 -
Re: Bones that Speak
This is really well written, and a LOT of big words in it. I think it describes most of Bones well and in the very end I think you could ...
Nov 5, 2011 -
Re: The Doll
This is great. I think it's nice that Copper is so firm in her independence that she would go as far as barfing on her expensive doll and naming it ...
Oct 5, 2011 -
Re: Leave me broken hearted, by the sideline, wondering why.
I absolutly loved this, it seemed so real to me. I could just feel the mood changing, kind of like summer to winter. I just saw one thing that seemed ...
Oct 4, 2011 -
Re: Creation
Hello! Like creativityrules said, this is all just my personal opinion so you don't have to listen (I realized that you couldn't listen anyway, you can only see/read..), or think ...
Oct 4, 2011 -
Re: The Magi {Ch. 10}
Yay! I'm finally reading more! Don't say that they're only eating because this chapter (in my mind) could be thought of as a door opening, leading to a bunch of ...
Sep 30, 2011 -
Re: Hellfire
Hello! I'd just like to say this is really exciting and fast paced, which is awesome. But I feel like even though it is Damon's point of view, it's being ...
Sep 2, 2011 -
Re: Once A Polly Tito
This made me think. Maybe I was thinking about buisness men dancing, and for some some reason I pictured their ties having a design of a person on them, but ...
Aug 31, 2011 -
Re: Stuck Again
I liked this poem a lot. In the beginning it was kind of hard to see where you were going with it, but but by the end it was all ...
Aug 31, 2011 -
Re: Reach: Chapter 1
I really liked this, it was filled with mystery and adventure! The story was fast paced and descriptive, like the other commentor said. I also liked that it wasn't too ...
Aug 25, 2011 -
Re: The Magi [Ch.9}
I'm really loving the story! I mean, it's great and I really love it, but you're only on chapter nine yet so many things have happened and honestly I think ...
Aug 8, 2011 -
Re: Watermelon
This poem was really good! I love watermelon, with or without salt. I could see the double meanings in it, and I think that's clever how you fit it in ...
Aug 8, 2011 -
Re: Trailer Trash
I really liked the message this gave of hope and making it through tough times, and the rhyming was nice too. But one stanza didn't make much sense and a ...
Aug 8, 2011 -
Re: Liar Liar, Heart on Fire
I liked this, I could sense a rhythem to it. I liked the theme but I think the last two stanzas were a bit off-topic. And the last line had ...
Aug 8, 2011
