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I read it after Lord of the Rings, because I'd reached another obsession, of course. ONe of those ones where my parents end up spending hundred because the library here ...

As usual, one of my mislead parents bought this book for me WAY (why can't I use italics here?) to early, but at least a teacher thoughtfull tore out *gasp* ...

I read this book in French (back when I could read French), and loved it. Of course, that was about six years ago, but i saw it in a bookstore ...

My best friend said she wouldn't talk to me until I read them (hardly a big deal, she's practically mute anyway), but I got 'em anyway. *get that?* *snickers* Of ...

Right before my family went to D.C. my mom bought the book for my brother- I ended up staying up till four with a flashlight reading it! Of course, then ...

When I read this book in class this year, I expected it to be like the other books Mom recomends: dull, obsolete, and not my style. I was so, so ...

Well written! One thing- the bird part seems just slightly unlikely, and it's disbelievability takes away from the rest of the story. Maybe it could just sit on a branch ...

Okay, aside from being disgusted (not in such a horrible way as you'd think) when the poor kid gor killed, I thought that was great! I'm not sure exactly how ...

I thought this prologue looks like it'll shape up to be a great story! Can't wait for the next installments. One thing, (not bad) I noticed is that it appears ...

I like this new start! Only one immensly tiny issue: I think the shoes should be squishing in the mud, not feet squishing in the shoes. Other than that, it's ...

Ok, because everyone else seems to have cleared up grammar mistakes and all that, i'd like to say: the first sentence doesn't catch me. While the rest of the story ...

Great new story- can't wait to find out what comes next. There were some things, like this: “But, Marina, Shell’s treating us all to MackerelDonalds.” “Well, I’m not allowed to ...

I love Emily. She sounds really funny. Ok, now there are a couple simple things you might wanna change, just to make it run smoother. I think that Emily's introduction ...

Great job! I loved your poem, although i think the re-write is much better. I notice you've been on for a while, but you haven't written anything new, and you ...

I loved the hacking wizard idea. And there are totally hackers at 11. at my schoool, this sixth grader hacked into our whole online database and screwed everything up, and ...