PhoenixXander

I'm okay, I wrote this a long time ago.

Ah, I will look over punctuation. (:

Oh, okay! Sorry I misunderstood. (:

I don't understand, experiencing what?

Alright, thanks for your review! You review my others and it helped! (: Appreciate it.

Ugh, its not one big stanza but when I transferred it from docs it didny separte it correctly, opps! Ill fix that! Ah the metaphors do suck, I wrote this ...

I don't know what the hell you just read, but it sure wasn't this poem. This is not a poem that seems to grab sympathy, it's the thoughts of someone ...

I just think we shouldn't use any derogatory words, it's all just bullying.

Thank you a lot!

Thank you so much!

I really appreciate the words you use and how you use them. This is a really strong love poem, it could be seen metaphorically or it could be seen as ...

Actually what you described would be bad,

Thank you for those revisions! I put them down on my physical copy and will add them as soon as I get to a device that allows it. (:

Thanks for pointing that out! (:

Thanks so much!