PhoenixLaFay

Thanks!

Thanks so much for your review! Yes, right now the flashback thing is very rough. That was mainly just me getting down a general idea for it. Could you maybe ...

Thanks for the review. I'm glad you liked my poem :) The reason it's so vague is because I was thinking that I would have to recite it in from ...

This could just be my computer, but the story is not actually shown. You could try reposting it or putting it in a comment if you don't have points to ...

This is so beautifully accurate!

Thanks!

I thought that was a possibility but I thought I should at least make sure. Happy poet-ing!

I really like the style used in this poem. I have never seen that style before. The only thing I have to critique is that "But my sin runs deep ...