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PhoenixEmberly

  • Article / Essay » Other, Review Re: Caught in the Past

    Very nice essay. I have never read this book, or even heard of i, but everything in this essay seems pretty solid. You did a good job at pulling examples ...

    Mar 25, 2020
  • Poetry » Health, Dramatic Re: The Coronavirus Prophecy

    I don't usually read poems, but I definitely think the stanza format was simple yet I appreciate it all the same. Interesting word choice here, not quite a word salad ...

    Mar 25, 2020
  • Short Story » Mystery / Suspense, Romantic Re: A strange love story!

    the loser has to fall It's simple and it's plain, why should I complain I sure do hope that's the right song. It's by ABBA, and if you like their ...

    Mar 25, 2020
  • Short Story » Realistic, General Re: Gone

    I almost never cry, but I have to hold back tears for this one. You were able to convey a scene without directly telling us as an audience what was ...

    Mar 25, 2020
  • Other » Realistic, General Re: Be someone who makes you happy.

    Hey there, I just stopped by to say that I think the message behind this is very good! It's a lesson that I myself and many others need to grasp ...

    Mar 24, 2020
  • Short Story » Mystery / Suspense, Realistic Re: Deprivation

    Hey there! I found this piece an interesting one, as it exposed me to a condition which I had never heard of prior. This is a shorter story, so I ...

    Mar 24, 2020
  • Article / Essay » Romantic, Realistic Re: To All the Boys Who Never Texted Me Back: P.S. I Still Hate You

    As I read this, I felt like I could relate to it. I too have plenty of friendships with people who never initiate the conversation with me. They ignore me, ...

    Mar 24, 2020
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Humor Re: Dear random citizen,

    I quite liked this. A letter from someone who is alone and destined to die is gifted to someone random. The witty remarks about the surroundings from the letter writer ...

    Mar 24, 2020


When one is highly alert to language, then nearly everything begs to be a poem.
— James Tate