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Re: The Old Clown
This has the makings of a great poem, and the concept is interesting. It's just the grammer and punctuation which lets it down, so I would work on that. Good ...
Sep 23, 2007 -
Re: Water
Lovely poem! I especially liked the first verse..and the clever little twist at the end. :D Good job :wink:
Sep 23, 2007