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  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: The Old Clown

    This has the makings of a great poem, and the concept is interesting. It's just the grammer and punctuation which lets it down, so I would work on that. Good ...

    Sep 23, 2007
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Water

    Lovely poem! I especially liked the first verse..and the clever little twist at the end. :D Good job :wink:

    Sep 23, 2007


That's just what translation is, I think. That's all speaking is. Listening to the other and trying to see past your own biases to glimpse what they're trying to say. Showing yourself to the world, and hoping someone else understands.
— Ramy (Babel by R. F. Kuang)