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Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: The Old Clown
This has the makings of a great poem, and the concept is interesting. It's just the grammer and punctuation which lets it down, so I would work on that. Good ...
Sep 23, 2007
Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Water
Lovely poem! I especially liked the first verse..and the clever little twist at the end. :D Good job :wink:
Sep 23, 2007

The most difficult thing in the world is to know how to do a thing and to watch somebody else doing it wrong, without comment.
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