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  • Article / Essay » General, General Re: Chew Gum, Don't Worry, Be Happy

    an almost cult-like following school. Delete "school." A school and a following are the same thing, and redundancy is not a friend. and the teacher who allows the ignorance of ...

    Dec 23, 2007
  • Short Story » General, General Re: delete

    I think, perhaps, your title put me off my stomach when it came to this story. The teeth-gritting use of capitals--the triple exclamation point (oh dear)--it was really too much ...

    Dec 23, 2007
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: last poem of summer

    I agree with what the others have said: there are too many questions here. It's so much more enigmatic to write the answers but not the questions, than the questions ...

    Dec 21, 2007
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: I Am poetry

    my name: whatever you want to call me, babe i am: a whore i wonder: why they call me that i see: my cat, asleep, soft breathing i want: just ...

    Dec 21, 2007
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Giants

    This is about flowers suffering under the shade of trees, yes? A little more metaphorical than realistic--one rarely sees flowers that don't thrive under the protection of the greater oaks, ...

    Dec 21, 2007


Every really new idea looks crazy at first.
— Alfred North Whitehead