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Re: Chew Gum, Don't Worry, Be Happy
an almost cult-like following school. Delete "school." A school and a following are the same thing, and redundancy is not a friend. and the teacher who allows the ignorance of ...
Dec 23, 2007 -
Re: delete
I think, perhaps, your title put me off my stomach when it came to this story. The teeth-gritting use of capitals--the triple exclamation point (oh dear)--it was really too much ...
Dec 23, 2007 -
Re: last poem of summer
I agree with what the others have said: there are too many questions here. It's so much more enigmatic to write the answers but not the questions, than the questions ...
Dec 21, 2007 -
Re: I Am poetry
my name: whatever you want to call me, babe i am: a whore i wonder: why they call me that i see: my cat, asleep, soft breathing i want: just ...
Dec 21, 2007 -
Re: Giants
This is about flowers suffering under the shade of trees, yes? A little more metaphorical than realistic--one rarely sees flowers that don't thrive under the protection of the greater oaks, ...
Dec 21, 2007
