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  • Article / Essay » General, General Re: Chew Gum, Don't Worry, Be Happy

    an almost cult-like following school. Delete "school." A school and a following are the same thing, and redundancy is not a friend. and the teacher who allows the ignorance of ...

    Dec 23, 2007
  • Short Story » General, General Re: delete

    I think, perhaps, your title put me off my stomach when it came to this story. The teeth-gritting use of capitals--the triple exclamation point (oh dear)--it was really too much ...

    Dec 23, 2007
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: last poem of summer

    I agree with what the others have said: there are too many questions here. It's so much more enigmatic to write the answers but not the questions, than the questions ...

    Dec 21, 2007
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: I Am poetry

    my name: whatever you want to call me, babe i am: a whore i wonder: why they call me that i see: my cat, asleep, soft breathing i want: just ...

    Dec 21, 2007
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Giants

    This is about flowers suffering under the shade of trees, yes? A little more metaphorical than realistic--one rarely sees flowers that don't thrive under the protection of the greater oaks, ...

    Dec 21, 2007


Life’s disappointments are harder to take if you don’t know any swear words.
— Bill Watterson