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Phindin

  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Frost Bite

    This is fun. The concept--falling angels trapping someone in somewhere to die--is great. Fun, fun. I think a quick proofread would take care of the most obvious errors, some of ...

    Dec 1, 2010
  • Short Story » General, General Re: The Device

    Oh, but you do enjoy flirting with abstrusity, don't you? I don't know why, but something about God and religion tickle my funny bone when presented in a certain way. ...

    May 25, 2008
  • Article / Essay » Review, General Re: King Dork by: Frank Portman

    I think I got a little less than halfway through and stopped. I didn't like it much. It's pretty standard as far as YA is concerned. You have your quasi-loser ...

    Mar 24, 2008
  • Article / Essay » Review, General Re: Atonement by Ian McEwan

    Well. I saw the movie, but I havem't read the book. I know my dad really liked it, though. And so the ending. From what you said, it seems to ...

    Jan 12, 2008
  • Short Story » General, General Re: D is for Diphtheria

    This is crisp, clean and a very enjoyable read. Your descriptions are good enough to be, well, good while at the same time not too long and annoying to slog ...

    Dec 31, 2007
  • Other » General, General Re: Emo

    If insults affect you that much, you shouldn't be complaining about it to us; you should seek medication or some other form of mental assistance. Alos, I don't think the ...

    Dec 22, 2007
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Bees and Wasps

    I suppose the last line is supposed make you go, "Wait, what?" That's what it did to me, at any rate. Also, the scientist in me really wants to nitpick ...

    Oct 11, 2007
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Bush Is Gay!

    Eh. It's difficult to get a laugh from me, and this didn't do it. And it would be a euphemy for me to say that Bush isn't my favorite president ...

    Oct 11, 2007


Everything in the universe has a rhythm, everything dances.
— Maya Angelou