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Re: On Being a Loser
Hello! Basket here. :D The thing I'm going to correct/am correcting are in bold within the quotation boxes. So, here we go. :D I was sitting on the sofa in ...
Jun 26, 2009 -
Re: Soulless [Chapter Two, Part 2]
Here I am once again! Haha... this is a really good story... You've got me hooked. (Glares) How dare you... “Stupid dinosaur,” I grumbled to the microwave. Haha. This made ...
Jun 26, 2009 -
Re: Souless [Chapter Two]
Hey! Basket here! I'm going review this since the first part was just so good. So, here we go. Its going to be the same as last time, mkayy? So, ...
Jun 26, 2009 -
Re: Souless [Chapter One, Part 2]
Hey! Basket here! I'm going review this since the first part was just so good. So, here we go. Its going to be the same as last time, mkayy? So, ...
Jun 25, 2009 -
Re: Soulless [Chapter One, part 1]...
Hey! Basket here to review! Ahh, I review as I read, so if something I say is later explained in the chapter, then I apologize and you can just ignore ...
Jun 25, 2009 -
Re: The Night I Set the Sky on Fire
Basket once again! Reviewing is still the same, so lets go, shall we? :D But I do have one . S cientifically speaking, of course. My little sister once croaked, ...
Jun 25, 2009 -
Re: Defining Strength [part 1]
Basket here to do the review! Haha, so, this is the second time I did this... the first time my computer shut down before I could submit it. :P The ...
Jun 25, 2009 -
Re: Book of Raziel - Chapter 2
Basket here once again. Battle ; it's the only joy I have while living, which also brought myself to join the Kingdom's force. I open my eyes, just to see ...
Jun 25, 2009 -
Re: Book of Raziel - Chapter 1
Hello! Basket again! Same reviewing process as before, mkayy? Let's get started. :D I'm alone, sitting while resting my head on my knees. Try switching "while" with "and". I said, ...
Jun 25, 2009 -
Re: Goodbye
Hey, Basket here and I'm here to review your piece! So, I review this as I read, so if I comment on something that is later explained in the chapter, ...
Jun 24, 2009 -
Re: Story of Melanie Scott
Hey! Basket here! I'm going to be reviewing your piece today... I hope you don't mind! My corrections or my suggestions on what should be corrected (in my opinion), are ...
Jun 23, 2009 -
Re: A Glimpse of Green
Hey! Basket here! I will be reviewing your piece today... hope you don't mind! So... even though I'm part of this contest (no worries, I won't steal ideas... my first ...
Jun 23, 2009 -
Re: Book of Raziel - Prologue [Rewrote]
Hey, got your request. =D So, my corrections will be in bold within the quotation boxes, mkayy? So, lets get started, shall we? I can't swim even if I'm in ...
Jun 20, 2009 -
Re: Venolf War - Chapters 1 - 6
Hey! Basket here. Got your message. Thanks for asking me do this! I need something to take my mind off life. God, I'm glad I love editing. My corrections are ...
Jun 19, 2009 -
Re: Hit the Black
Hmm, this was really nice. Well... not nice. It was a horror story. But what I meant was that it was written very well, especially for a horror story. Everything ...
Jun 15, 2009
