PeterHerronGunner

Wow. I really liked this one. It drew me into the conflict and had an interesting and engaging backstory, despit being a short story and not being able to write ...

Nice! I really liked this one! It had a good mysterious opening that left me NEEDING to read what happened. My only peeve is what happened to him? One second ...

Hey there! Like the others have said before me, I really liked the way it was written. You paid attention to the details, but didn't dabble in the needless. The ...

That was great! It was in total accord with Draco's character, he talks tough but has a weak heart. I aslo like your interpritaion of Severus Snape's charcter. Where he ...

Wow! That was really good! I'm not one for nitpicks and everyone else already mentioned the flaws. I really liked this story, so please let me know when you write ...

That was great! :D It was like watching the movie but better! :elephant: I love the way you portrayed Jack and Will! It was great! The rum was totally a ...

:cry: (Sobbing brokenly) That was so sad! :cry: I mean the girl died! :cry: (Sobbing pathetically, after a few minutes wipes eyes and resumes typing) Sorry about that. It was ...

Like all my predecessors I really don't know what to say... :shock: Towards the end, I felt tears spring into the corners of my eyes. :cry: But it was great, ...

That was sad! :cry: I mean I was literally in tears! Dang (Sobbing pathetically)! :cry: I love when people appeal to Snapes good side. He such a misunderstood character! But ...

Whoa... That was great. It has a sort of (to me) sinister humor about it. Like someones doing the evil laugh in the background the whole time I read it. ...