PersephonesGarden

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So good! I love how the first few stanzas are all similar (listing words then ending with the same line "these words remind me of ____") because it makes it ...

Thank so much for your review! I love the way you analyze the themes of the poem- it helps me to know I%u2019m actually communicating what I want to! I ...

Thank you so much for the encouragement! I also love your suggestions for revision! I hadn%u2019t previously considered the capitalization of the lines, but I agree that it could really ...

Thank you so much for the review!! It%u2019s so encouraging to know you liked it %uD83D%uDE0A You perfectly understood everything I was attempting to communicate which is very relieving (sometimes ...

It’s so beautiful and whimsical 😊 I love the soft feel of all your description, especially in the lines “The sky weeps it’s wisdom, and the earth listens.” It so ...

It’s so beautiful and whimsical 😊 I love the soft feel of all your description, especially in the lines “The sky weeps it’s wisdom, and the earth listens.” It so ...