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What Mhmm said. It's an interesting start, but can you give us more?

Since I had a lot to say and all the quotes would just overwhelm the post, I saved it to a Word document, and everything I had to say was ...

I envy writers like you. It seems like everything you write just comes out beautifully, no matter what it is. That so made me cry. XDD Thanks a lot!

Thanks, you two! I love this a lot because it's really pretty [not being narcissic or anything XD] and it also means a lot to me. So, you know, I'm ...

Yay! Thanks, Snoink. I will do that. :]] GASPPP. Okay, just noticed your siggie. Please tell me you really don't like the Aggies...XD

Thank you all for the feedback! I really appreciate it. :] -loves- And yes, I know the voice is a bit mature. I mean, the narrative. But at first I ...

Ditto Suzanne. It seems more like one of those Time articles, like what they're doing before they meet with George Clooney or something. It seems too casual for an essay. ...

It's pretty interesting. Again, someone already covered what I wanted to say. >.< Someone like Camille.

Everybody pretty much covered what I wanted to say. It's okay, but sort of vague, I think. --Seree.

Um, I'm pretty sure this belongs in one of the poetry sections. Possibly lyric poetry? However, the title is captivating, however incorrectly it's categorized.

I don't know if this should be in the nonfiction section...O.o

I liked this, and I think everyone just ran through what I wanted to say. And I do love the title. :] --Serena.

I wasn't trying to tell you how to write it. I was suggesting a way to improve it. I'm not a dictator when it comes to any writing. And note ...

Lovethislovethislovethis. I remember the first time reading it, I had to go run and hide under my pillow. Not really, but you get the idea. What I love is the ...

Micha's sort of right. There's no point here, and it's extremely illiterate! Grr. So...edit this until you've given us a reason, a very good one, to read this poem at ...