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Peradion

  • Poetry » General, Lyrical Re: God Hates Hitchhikers

    Wow. I am asking this question strictly for the sake of curiosity, and you 100% don't have to answer, but how long have you been writing poetry? This piece feels ...

    May 12, 2024
  • Short Story » Mystery / Suspense, Dramatic Re: We Cannot Fathom The Dirt Sky

    I'm in awe of this piece. I have to tell you, your ability to elicit an emotional reaction is astronomical. I may be biased, because I'm generally an emotional person, ...

    May 11, 2024
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Lyrical Re: It is you.

    Hello, Kaavyak! I'm going to start by saying that I think this is a very strong piece of poetry. The format and structure is very solid, and the language used ...

    May 11, 2024
  • Short Story » Dramatic, General Re: The Gates of Hell

    Hello! I'm going to start off this review by saying, you have a very strong sense of imagery, and I'm honestly highly impressed. I didn't notice anything actually wrong with ...

    Jul 8, 2019
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Mystery / Suspense Re: Chapter 1: The Story - The Assassin and The Tyrant

    Hello—I'm going to start off this review by saying that I admire the level of creativity you've used throughout this story. I think it has a lot of potential, and ...

    Jul 2, 2019


You got rid of them. Yes, that's just like you. Getting rid of everything unpleasant instead of learning to put up with it.
— Aldous Huxley, Brave New World