Penlorde

Haha :D please do!

Hi >.< Thank you for the review! As for this piece, I was trying to use the house as a metaphor for a place where you belong. Exploring the idea ...

The men in white are supposed to be doctors... But I'm glad you get it now!

No problem, I genuinely enjoy this story :D

Well, you got a part of it. The pill he took, to symbolise that he wants to live. Sort of like an anti-suicide pill. He was dying and he saw ...

I edited it, Is this clearer?

I tried to fix it, any better?

Also I just edited the piece, what do you think?

Thank you so much for this. It's so encouraging to hear things like this. Thank you, thank you, thank you.

Heyyy :) Thanks. I'll clear it up. Eventually..

Why thank you :)

No, thank you for taking the time to write this piece

Incredible.

Thank you :)

Oh okay! Thanks for educating me :)