PenguinAttack

You edited. Beautifully. Make me come back to this, please?

Go for it, Zabuza! Just explain that you're working on English translations in your post, if you like. ^^

Guh, my heart is yours. I may even return to review.

Thank you both for the commentary. I'm glad you enjoy the words I use, Ilovebubbles. TheWalkinDude: I entirely disagree! Not with your comments regarding the poem itself, although I'd love ...

Locked for plagarism.

Firstly: I have read the first two books, but am unwilling to purchase the third book until it’s cheaper, at which point I’ll have read them all. I believe I ...

I love you. Remind me to come back and tell you why when I'm not half asleep.

JON. What did you do?! That second last line is horrible compared to your previous one. Like, it's just terrible. I'm glad you've kept it in past tense (Although I ...

The prologue is just the opening. I believe that in later chapters everything will be revealed in a nice, flowing manner - or so I hope. Thank you all for ...

Thank you, love! I fixed up the little things but I'm not sure about the line you mentioned but I'm thinking about it. I'm pretty sure she's running against the ...

You are so awesome I could cry. WINMUCH.

Moved to General Fiction Novels.

I hear exactly what you're saying and to be honest, I'm not surprised. This is exactly what you say it is. I've not been able to come up with anything ...

Moved to Historical Fiction.

*Moved to Fantasy Fiction*